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Original: 4/19/2006 8:16 PM
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Wednesday, April 19, 2006

 
*Tick, Tick...Boom!

Being me is like being a timer,
sensitive to the touch
alarm sounds with one swift move.
I sit and tick
ready to boil over, ready to buzz
as soon as you set me off
which, I’ve learned,
doesn’t take much.
It’s only a matter of time
before I sound again
because you’ve pushed my buttons
or maybe I’ve run
out of batteries
to keep up with         you
know what makes my fuse blow
but you still push
like you want to see the sparks fly,
your time’s run out
my patience is through.
Tick, tick...Boom!

* Tick, Tick...Boom! is a musical written by Jonathan Larson.

© Lauren R. Walley


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Lauren,
WOW good one this is a real good poem I like the way it carried the reader through. Well... I have a good news... my collection of poems are getting published. Name of the book is "Age Of Survival" the contract terms have been worked out.
Now... yeah... I've gone through some hell to take myself off a relationship. It is a long story someday I will tell. I am out of that and now moving on. How are things going on for you? As a friend, brother I will always be there. Keep up this good poetic works. Alrighty.
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